It was very good and hit all of the main points. However, it would be beneficial to read over it before turning it in next time. There were some distracting grammatical errors. Other than that, I thought it could have used a few more visual aids.
Did a great job of introducing the main plot and main ideas. Good use of pictures to help enforce the message. A new thought we had was does PTSD have an impact on anyone in any tramtic situation?
You did a nice job summarizing the film and telling what the main ideas were. There were a couple spots where there were typos and random pictures were inserted.
The text is very informative and helps understanding greatly. Next time, I would include more pictures or animations to help keep the readers interest.
You used ample information and covered all of your main points but if you look two buttons to the right of the "m" button, you will find a button with a small dot on it. This is called a period, we end sentences with these. Otherwise, your organization was solid, but I think you could use a few more pictures to keep the attention of the reader and just 15 minutes to look over your text.
It was very good and hit all of the main points. However, it would be beneficial to read over it before turning it in next time. There were some distracting grammatical errors. Other than that, I thought it could have used a few more visual aids.
ReplyDeleteDid a great job of introducing the main plot and main ideas. Good use of pictures to help enforce the message. A new thought we had was does PTSD have an impact on anyone in any tramtic situation?
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You did a nice job summarizing the film and telling what the main ideas were. There were a couple spots where there were typos and random pictures were inserted.
ReplyDeleteThe text is very informative and helps understanding greatly. Next time, I would include more pictures or animations to help keep the readers interest.
ReplyDeleteYou used ample information and covered all of your main points but if you look two buttons to the right of the "m" button, you will find a button with a small dot on it. This is called a period, we end sentences with these. Otherwise, your organization was solid, but I think you could use a few more pictures to keep the attention of the reader and just 15 minutes to look over your text.
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